Nice style and i love the eyes. They strike me somehow.
i agree with everything J-PAC30032 said, especially with the mag/utility/dump pouches. The loadout looks REALLY REALLY ergonomic. i'm actually considering selling everything in my current, unwieldy and awkward setup and replacing it with something inspired by this. Great job.
Here goes: 1. I like that there isn't enough metal to make a humvee on this. 2. Above that, I like that you used fabric for most of the gear. 3. I like the location of the mag, utility and dump pouches, and that they can ostensibly hold mags for the weapon shown.
1. All that armor around the neck would render it impossible to shoulder a weapon. Ditto with the shoulder pieces 2. The vest in considerably longer than a vest would be IRL. Most of them end immediately above the belly button, to facilitate better movement.